Don’t get me wrong, I thought the project as a whole was quite brilliant. But you got one thing wrong. It actually goes:

“I hate the homeless-…”
“…-ness problem that plagues our city.”

Also, IMHO, Act 3 dropped the ball a little bit. There were plenty of missed opportunities for video-game-ization … a timer running out until Captain Hammer unfreezes, for example, or the red clothes being a new option at the end … the various parties and bank robberies being games that unlock, while maybe a “Billy” level suddenly becomes inaccessible …

I’d just like to say that this was totally awesome. Kudos.

Act 3, as well as Acts 1 and 2, are all totally awesome. The 8-bit tunes and love is very much appreciated.

One small critique on Act 3. It seems that Dr. Horrible blasts two people with the death ray before “get a pic” and “do a blog” dialogue. That part seems to go against the character and underlying foundation of the story.

To me, my interpretation of Dr. Horrible is that killing isn’t his thing. It’s his moral delima. On one hand he REALLY wants to join ELE yet his personal line is that he didn’t want to kill. (e.g. shunning Moist’s suggestion of killing a child-to-be-Pope and old person to join ELE) That is until it was Cpt. Hammer who nudged Billy over the edge to commit to killing Cpt. Hammer. Even then, when it came time to pull the trigger, “Here goes – no mercy…” he still hesitates to cross that line.

Just my two cents on why that part bothered me. Other than that, the filling out of scenes where Billy sneaks into the ceremony by helping set up really fleshed things out and the “boss fight” with Hammer was quite awesome. The blinking title screen was also great!

Overall, well done! They were enjoyable and I wished they had been included on the blu-ray as an extra.

Best wishes and thanks for your hard work.
H.

Hello,

I see you have addressed my critique in your 8-bit commentary section. Although I disagree with your decision to pay homage to the inconsistencies of 8-bit games at that point in the story, I’m glad that it was a conscious choice to do so instead of on a whim.

H.

dude… this thing makes me wanna cry.. howdd you do that… all the hard work and dedication.. one of the best things i ever seen and will ever see in my life . epic..